Open Poetry #13 |
A Three Course Delight |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
As the day closes it's door With the approaching of the night I find myself alone with you In front of the firelight Staring at the embers Basking in the glorious heat I feel your warm, manly hands As they begin to caress my feet How I love being close to you How I yearn for your touch May I move closer to you? Would that be asking too much? I feel your hand as it travels Along my thighs, up to my hips As I imagine the sensual softness Of your gorgeous, sweet lips The aroma of jasmine Completes the sensual mood Red wine and our love There's no need for real food We dine on our love It's a three course affair No need is there for anyone else But us to be there For entree I will choose A generous helping of your lips As I'll request for your hands To rest upon my swaying hips Main course will be a treat For our bodies will finally meet As our passion starts to burn And our bodies begin to yearn So much electricity is in the air As I catch sight of your wanting stare Our hearts now beating so fast How long will our passion last? Are we ready for dessert? Will this make our meal complete? As I move on top of you And finally our bodies, they greet Your hands on my shoulders Warm breath on my skin No longer am I able to control My cheeky, wicked grin You whisper sweet nothings As we two become one So soon our sweet loving Will be over and done How satisfying was this meal But there's something I need to know If I tip the waiter handsomely May I have another three courses to go? Suetang |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Hmmmmmmm, time for a cold shower. Cute ending! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this menu! LOL. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I guess it's dangerous to write so close to dinner time?? Suetang |
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Panne447 Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196S.A. TX |
Sue Thank goodness I do most of mine at night...after dinner... This was a super read and loved the ending. Panne |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Panne Thank you for your kind comment. I just hope people don't get the wrong idea of me from this piece. I guess I just have a good imagination. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sue, As you know, I liked this one a lot. You've a good imagination. Michael Proust- |
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