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Open Poetry #13

A time of Blue

robin-shep
Junior Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 28
northern California, USA

0 posted 2001-03-25 11:39 AM

What is this feeling -
Almost palpable -
alone when I didnt ask it -
The silence - friend or foe?

A time of rest you say,
or time of sorrow, wondering.

I feel.
I feel a heaviness of life.
A weariness of action,
A weariness of strife.

Your pep talks make me angry,
Though some how they must be true.
What I really wish is someone ...
To pink away my blue.

IS
that someone
YOU?

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-03-25 12:19 PM

Robert~
WELCOME to Passion's - a circle of friendship.
Stay with us ... we WILL pink you up !
Bless ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

2 posted 2001-03-25 02:56 PM

We will! Welcome to Passions, Robert!

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-03-25 03:12 PM

"Your pep talks make me angry,
Though some how they must be true.
What I really wish is someone ...
To pink away my blue."

Very nicely said, and I hope you find that pink to take away your blue.

Every minute you are angry, you lose 60 seconds of happiness.
- Ralph Waldo Emerson

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-03-25 03:51 PM

I'll agree. Great poem, and welcome to PIP.

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

robin-shep
Junior Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 28
northern California, USA

5 posted 2001-03-31 07:08 AM

I appreciate you responses and welcomes. I hope I can contribute now and then. Thanks again.

lives of great men all remind us
we can make our lives sublime
and departing leave behind us
footprints on the sands of time

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