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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 2001-03-25 05:53 AM

~ * ~ I FEEL Love ~ * ~

I brush a lock of your hair aside~
Bend over to kiss your tiny cheek.
I love watching you sleep.
Listening to you breathe~
You tickle my heart.
I pray one day you will know~
The gift you have given me.

I wished for this all my life.
Felt for it in every breeze~
Looked for it in each~
Warming ray of sunshine.
Where only cold breezes blew.
Each prism of God's rainbows~
Somehow faded in mind's eye.

I searched for it in every moonbeam~
Each star that shone in night's tiara~
In the gentle waves of the ocean~
In raindrops that fell like my tears.
I stood out in the moonlight~
And wondered will it ever come?
I watched, and patiently waited.

As shattered tears of glass fell~
Dreams of it turned to dust~
Like fall leaves, it eluded me.
Why not me? Others felt it.
So embraced in its touch.
Was I never to feel,
The comfort of its gentle touch?

I share this night again with you~
My darling little angel~
Heart of my heart~
Flesh of my flesh~
You are my very essence~
My inner strength~
You warm the center of my soul.

You live in a place~
No one has ever seen.
You reside in and have melted~
A once frozen heart.
When you and I met we bonded.
The winds shifted current~
In all the mountains and seas.

Breezes whispered words of love~
As my dormant heart opened up.
You rushed in on gossamer wings.
Love now grows because of you~
Sun shines on cloudy days.
I love you for you made me feel~
That which no one ever could~
~*~ I FEEL love ~*~

~*~ For my Granddaughter - my angel ~*~

~*~ Mysteria ~*~
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~*~A poet is someone who reads more than they write ~*~

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 03-26-2001).]

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 2001-03-25 06:53 AM

absolutely lovely, mysteria.... and i feel Love, too.... so beautifully you've portrayed it..... and a wonderful tribute you have penned

so nice to have you here on the blue pages......

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2001-03-25 07:14 AM

Angels do come in the most precious little packages, don't they?... They're neat when they get bigger too...

Nice one, Mysteria..

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-03-25 07:50 AM

This is absolutely adorable Mysteria .... tender, sweet and full of love and emotion ... just lovely!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Just A Woman
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

4 posted 2001-03-25 08:15 AM

You've made my morning, Mysteria. Just beautifully!

"Often the test of courage is not to die but to live"

~Vittorio Alferi~

Martha Cowan
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since 2001-03-08

Posts 240
Groves, Texas

5 posted 2001-03-25 08:40 AM

Oh, Mysteria...how very lovely this was. Spoken so tenderly, the voice of your heart proclaims very vividly the definition of love, and all that it encompasses. This took my breath away this morning....absolutely beautiful, sweet lady.

Have a wonderful Sunday.....hugs and much love sent your way, Martha

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-03-25 08:52 AM

You're flying with your Angels, lady....

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2001-03-25 09:51 AM

I brush a lock of your hair aside~
Bend over to kiss your tiny cheek.
I love watching you sleep.
Listening to you breathe~
You tickle my heart.
I pray one day you will know~
The gift you have given me.

I wished for this all my life.
Felt for it in every breeze~
Looked for it in each~
Warming ray of sunshine.
Where only cold breezes blew.
Each prism of God's rainbows~
Somehow faded in mind's eye.

I searched for it in every moonbeam~
Each star that shone in night's tiara~
In the gentle waves of the ocean~
==================================

Mysteria this is such a wonderful poetic declaration of your love for your grandbaby..
written with such sincere and lovely expressed emotions...
your love for her glows off the page in every word.
this has wonderful imagery as well.
a beautiful poem in content and presentation as well.
With her as your muse ... inspiration takes on wings

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2001-03-25 09:54 AM

Mysteria--What beautiful words of love you pen for such a precious feeling...thank you for this.

Katherine Chandler
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

9 posted 2001-03-25 09:59 AM

I loved this one, my friend. Only a small child could touch our heartstrings as Victoria has touched yours. This poem shows just a piece of your heart and it is so beautiful..

Kate

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-03-25 11:09 AM

Oh, I sure hope you stick around for a long time!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2001-03-25 11:46 AM

Mysteria, my friend~
Your love for Tori just GLOWS in this beauty.
Big ole *HUGS !
Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

12 posted 2001-03-25 12:10 PM

Wow!!!

I was shocked this morning to see you all on here and your lovely comments actually. You are sure wonderful people at this site. What I can say to you all is this...I never knew what real love was until this child came into my life. She is my sunshine (now I know how that person felt writing that song!); my anti-depressant, my walking comedy channel (who needs t.v.?) I am like an excited teenager waiting for her first date's arrival when she is coming to stay over, and am prepared with one of everything from every store too. She has my genes, she loves poetry and art, outside, whoopie...so we do a lot of walking, storytime and no t.v.! I will be blessed with another package of joy in November or December so ask me if I am in heaven? Thanks again, everyone, and I am planning to stay a long time at Pipps. I was just not too sure if some of what I write is poetry, but I sure love doing it, and I am soooooooo glad you seem to like it too. Thank you all so very much for making me feel at home here, and supporting my must by reading what she tends ramble on about. Bless you all!

coyote
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

13 posted 2001-03-25 07:04 PM

Sharon,
You obviously love your grand-daughter very much.
Poetry is a heartfelt combination of words reaching out to people, touching their hearts, and in turn having them reach back.
I haven't been here long, but I feel a sense of belonging. I guess most of us wear our hearts on our sleeves in here.
I don't faint at the sight of blood. lol
Thanks for your words.

"The poet is the priest of the invisible."
Wallace Stevens

kismetkelsey
Junior Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 32
Canada

14 posted 2001-03-25 08:06 PM

This beautiful poem full of a grandmother's love touched my heart Mysteria!~How lovely that you can convey this feeling so well.Excellent work!~kismetkelsey

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

15 posted 2001-03-26 04:14 AM

Coyote...if you faint we shall catch you! I haven' been here long either but feel this is now my poetic "home" away from home. Thank you for reading my tribute to the most perfect being I have ever seen, but then I could be a tad biased.

KismetKelsey....Welcome gurl! About time! Hope you find your way around, any questions you just ask and a million people will come a runnin - thanks for reading.

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

16 posted 2001-03-26 07:26 AM

Mysteria, this makes me think back to when I had my own sweet daughters. I wish I had thought to write something for them, then. But that was before I started writing again. I'm sure your grandaughter will treasure it when she is old enough to understand it.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

17 posted 2001-03-27 03:37 AM

Dee ~ Never to late to tell someone you love them! I will look for your poem to your daughters. Thanks for reading.

Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

18 posted 2001-06-05 09:53 AM

its always a thrill to read your incredible poetry and imagary

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