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| Open Poetry #13 |
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To Plant This Garden |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Our hands touch, dirt covered Then our eyes meet, sweat dripping The world goes away in that look You offer your mouth, lemonade taste We lay back in the grass, clover scented And dream under a summer sky Tools pushed aside, flowers forgotten One lone rose petal, delicately used The birds rejoice with us Summer breezes on our bodies, soft caress Sunset blazes across the sky, sailors delight Theres always tomorrow...to plant this garden |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Paula..."..there's always tomorrow...to plant this garden..." Excellent...and very wise. Bob |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
But tomorrow you may remember today and that garden may never get planted. Well, there's always the produce department! Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
What a great way to not plant the garden!  Paula, this is wonderful!  SEA |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Paula...I love the way you constructed this throughout in sort of a thought, after-thought way. The picture painted, the word flow, a unique consistant meter of its own.....everything is perfect! Well crafted and a very, very nice read. Mike |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
Makes me want to rush right out and find some...flowers yeah thats is LOL |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Paula this poem really creates nice images and thoughts....James |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I wondered why I like gardening so much. Joyce |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
This poem really puts you in the feelings of the writer. must have been in a good mood when you wrote this. =) "Tools pushed aside, flowers forgotten One lone rose petal, delicately used" So romantic! *JOE* |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Bob...thats what tomorrows are for...thanks darlin JLR...lol so we just get dirty again...and again...and again...hehehe Mike...you flatter me sir...and I thank you for that fnbj...go for it LOL James...thanks you sweet poetfriend...you know I value your words Joyce...LOL yeah me too Joe...I was in a mood alright LOL...thank you sweetie...Im glad you found this romantic |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What did ya do after that huh? c'mon huh what? This piece sure has some great images Paula.......I could see me there and I was looking around for you. Where were you? You were hiding in the tall grass weren't ya? I'll find ya, there's no escaping...do I have to help with the garden the next day?......aw! I do! Oh well that's the price ya pay ain't it? |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
gardening never sounded more delightful |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
ethome...you lil devil you heheh...Im not hiding too hard...look around a little...see? And of course you have to help...how else will we NEVER get this planted? Bill...then come dig with me....maybe we will find some worms and we can go......fish |
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