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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-04-29 10:44 PM


Everyday, I taste first kiss--
something that can't happen twice.
I want to gently lick your lips-
move you miles with fingertips.
Hold you--oh-so-close- in arms
Keeping you safe from all harm.

Like the shadow on the ground,
light behind in endless bound,
ALWAYS--I will be around,
in prayer again you grace my arms.

Until that day, our first kiss,
lingers in sweet memories' bliss,
and as I close this page of book,
I close my eyes in pain of look--

she looked me deeply in my eyes..
as I whispered, "Love? goodbye..."

*a special duet by serenity and ray's heart...hopefully a new member..."

© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2001-04-29 10:47 PM


You tell 'Ray's Heart' that he's welcome here any time! Loved this!    
serenity blaze
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2 posted 2001-04-29 10:50 PM


Ray thanks you, sharon.   and guess what? I've found another poet! (ain't he sweet?)
Tiersdin
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3 posted 2001-04-29 10:53 PM


Very beautiful, Serenity, a wonderful read...

-Tier

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2001-04-30 01:49 AM


your right .. tis a most special duet ...
and further proof of my rhyme water theory *L*
send those vials baby  

There are two lasting bequests
that we can hope to instill in our children
one is roots ...
the other ... wings.

suthern
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5 posted 2001-04-30 04:49 PM


Ray, don't be shy... we're (relatively *G*) harmless! LOL This duet is a beauty... well done to the both of you!
Sven
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6 posted 2001-04-30 06:09 PM


love this one serenity. . . you too Ray!!  

great. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Dark Angel
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7 posted 2001-04-30 07:06 PM


Everyday, I taste first kiss--
                         something that can't happen twice.
                         I want to gently lick your lips-
                         move you miles with fingertips.

Lordy me, Phew.

Congrats on a beautiful duet, "Ray's Heart"  and me Sista  

Maree

vandana
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8 posted 2001-05-01 02:32 PM


like this
serenity blaze
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9 posted 2001-05-02 05:39 PM


Ray is flattered and thanks you all---(he's cute when he blushes) and I thank you too...Hopefully something new soon!  
Paula Finn
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10 posted 2001-05-03 04:04 AM


What a perfect pair you make...please tease him into joining us  girl...
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