There is an angel and a devil in your love

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Open Poetry #13

There is an angel and a devil in your love

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-04-09 08:26 PM

There is an angel,
in your love.
When you touch me,
when we make love.
So tender and pure.
This little angel,
is so smooth.
It gives me,
love.
And takes me to heaven.
There is a devil,
in your love.
When you go,
when you don't call.
When in my bed,
I lie awake feeling sorry for myself.
It takes me to hell.
It rips my love.
There is an angel,
there is a devil in your love and I cannot choose,
which one is worse.
They feed each other,
with my love.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 04-09-2001).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-04-09 08:30 PM

An interesting concept, and you are probably more on target than any realize....

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2001-04-09 08:30 PM

Ahh..yes..Beautiful poem.
Hope the subject isn't swallowed whole though.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-04-09 08:32 PM

and this is the battle. . .

excellent walker. . .

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Beckalini
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since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

4 posted 2001-04-09 08:38 PM

Brilliant write walker. I suppose, in a way, love turns us all into little devils...horny or otherwise. Heh heh

~Becky~

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

5 posted 2001-04-10 09:10 AM

Are we surprised that I understand this perfectly? Very well said...as always.

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

6 posted 2001-04-10 12:26 PM

I love the piece. Love does change us all.

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