In Dreams....(a Rictameter....)

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SEA

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with you

0 posted 2001-04-09 04:30 PM

~In dreams~
His love finds me
Surrounds me in softness
Protecting me from fears that haunt
A gentleness that is stronger than steel
His love is all I need and want
My haven from the world
My one safe place
~In dreams~

~SEA~

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

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1 posted 2001-04-09 04:35 PM

Beautiful - - now I must search out 'rictameter'
( I love a challenge ~G~)

Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16

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Pakistan

2 posted 2001-04-09 04:42 PM

May he come and God complete your wish soon.

I love to nice poetry.

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-04-09 04:46 PM

OK, I give up. What is a rictameter? Does it measure earthquakes?

By the way, I just love your verse. You are either talking about THE man or Jesus. Or ... both.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

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Georgia

4 posted 2001-04-09 04:47 PM

Beautifully written SEA

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

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Seattle, WA, USA

5 posted 2001-04-09 04:52 PM

Such gentle words, one almost misses the strength that protects. Good job.

"I am not now that which I have been."

SEA

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with you

6 posted 2001-04-09 04:55 PM

WY~ thank you...Marina and Parker have done them...I just looked at the syllable count of Parkers and tried one

WC~thank you

Interloper~ it's as far as I can tell a 2,4,6,8,10,8,6,4,2 count of syllables

Brad~ thank you

Julian~ thanks

~SEA

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

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Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-04-14 11:15 PM

So this is where peace is found!
Just beautiful!

Take care,
Melissa~

Kit McCallum

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8 posted 2001-04-15 01:27 PM

SEA, this is lovely! I loved the form and phrasing you crafted this wonderful piece with, very nicely written!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Alan
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right next door

9 posted 2001-04-15 03:02 PM

A wonderful place dreams. I like this style but does it have to have this shape?

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2001-04-15 06:04 PM

SEA - a very touching romantic writer are you. Liked this one much.

BC

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11 posted 2001-04-15 06:23 PM

A rictameter is the instrument that measures my heartbeats when I read your poetry...normally indicating an oncoming tremor of huge proportions

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 04-15-2001).]

Denise

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12 posted 2001-04-15 06:31 PM

Well done, SEA! This is lovely!

Chelsea~
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Ontario, CANADA

13 posted 2001-04-15 07:53 PM

SEA,

so beautiful and soothing
with a great style

Beckalini
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since 2001-01-02

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Yorkshire, England

14 posted 2001-04-16 07:51 AM

I found this really peaceful. I love reading and writing about dreams. Subject handled excellently here SEA. Loved the read

~Becky~

Coal Surrender
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since 2001-04-01

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15 posted 2001-04-16 11:14 AM

Precious thoughts, gently woven in a brief, yet charming fashion.

Coal

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