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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-04-15 02:12 AM

I look at you and oh
still water, smooth as silk -
a looking glass
within your eyes
I see myself
Insurmountable surpassed.

The sun is not
comparison
the light that I see there
shed of shroud
through darkened cloud
as sparkles fill the air.

Into you
I would dive deep
with not a worry
of the depth.
In your arms
I just might sleep
and not a drop
to taste of Lethe.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-04-15 08:24 AM

"still water, smooth as silk...."

that will have me gliding along....

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-04-15 08:28 AM

and not a drop
to taste of Lethe

Oh girl you just keep educating me *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-04-15 08:39 AM

Serenity~
There are times I've needed a huge sip of that river ...
and other times when I was glad I didn't partake.

Love n' hugs for a wonderful write.
You have a nice Easter, love.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-04-15 08:48 AM

"shed of shroud
through darkened cloud
as sparkles fill the air."

Beautiful Serenity! I loved the flow of your words in this wonderful piece, well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-04-15 10:27 AM

I look at you and oh
still water, smooth as silk -
a looking glass
within your eyes
I see myself
Insurmountable surpassed.
====================
shed of shroud
through darkened cloud
as sparkles fill the air.

Into you
I would dive deep
with not a worry
of the depth.
In your arms
I just might sleep
and not a drop
to taste of Lethe.
=====================

you do know how cool this poem is right?
well you should!!
work those metaphors baby and wrap them in rhyme divine...
then sleep me twin.. sleep in serenity.
hugs lovie

me

In another life...I know I loved you then
Lightning strikes twice...we're destined again.
We dont have to make promises...we were always meant to be

Coal Surrender
Member

since 2001-04-01

Posts 84
U.S.

6 posted 2001-04-16 11:39 AM

Treasured writing, love touches without a doubt.

Coal

[This message has been edited by Coal Surrender (edited 04-16-2001).]

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