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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Some Days Some days I want to beg serious on the knees begging reminding you of the last promise we made to find a way to love each other…while still doing the right thing. What was I thinking? Some days I think I was delusional to have ever let us begin but then it only takes one moment relived one poem out of all the words we spoke to know we were meant to be…just never to endure. Why can’t I just accept that? Some days I think that somehow someway I will see you, again and at that moment, not one moment will have passed since that first night and you will hold me there so I can breath again all my sins…forgiven and forgotten. Why do I let myself hope? Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter [This message has been edited by JLR (edited 04-08-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
The hope is the hardest thing to let go of. Painful one, JLR. Sometimes, no matter how hard you try, it is never good enough. I wish it was . . . All writing comes |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JLR~ Such a heartrendered write - 'one poem out of all the words we spoke to know we were meant to be…just never to endure.' Sometimes it is just that way ... and all the wishing in the world doesn't change it ... There comes a time when you have to move beyond it. And you will know when that time has come. Be ready ... it could be tomorrow !  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This sounds like a painful and rather hopeless experience, but I am hoping it will have a happy ending for you. Betty Lou Hebert |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Here's hoping for both of us. :-) *Laura* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Because "hope" is eternal, JLR....and in hope, we find faith, and in faith, we know that one day, a true love will surface.... we don't know when, or where, or how, or why.... we just know.... |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
It's hard hoping and wishing and the days seem even longer when we do that. I hope this ends as a blessing for you...You truly have talent, My Friend. Sauni Sauni :) |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
JLR- Thank, God for hope because without it we would be nothing.The sun always comes out. Well expressed! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
because hope is eternal. . . it always exists. . . and, as long as we have hope. . . we will go on. . . excellent my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
Your frustration and confusion were conveyed well in this one JLR. Brillant expression of feelings...very heartfelt. We find hope in releasing notions of hopelesness through poetry...and you write with an articulate pen. I'm sure the clouds will move away soon, just keep hoping. *Hugs* ~Becky~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Lone Wolf---Often hope is the last thing we let go of. Thanks for your consistant support. Marge---Could be tonight...frustration is building rapidly with the help of bare reality. If wishes were horses... Trillium---Didn't seem hopeless in the beginning but then my eyes were probably closed. Thanks for reading and responding. Laura---Here's hoping for both of us...YES, to move on. I keep saying that don't I? Sunshine---or maybe not. It's ok, a smooth sail is looking better every day. Saunni---Thanks for reading and the compliment. walker---My friend, thanks for your always encouraging words. Sven---As always, I am honored by your response. Truly, thank you. Becky---Thank you so much for the extremely kind comments. Hope to be reading more of you soon. Beckalini? Are you Italian? |
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