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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2001-04-09 09:46 AM

Floating on the Tide

It stays as object pleasantry
In the shadows of my memory
A memory that never grew old
But ever stayed a shocking bold.

The shock went through the hide of me
The groan that woke my manhood tree
The serge of magic adult power
That brought this youngster to flower.

And I have never been the same
It changed my life and worldly aim
Though petals fall much less than then
I still don’t have the slightest ken.

It turned me from the coyest boy
Into a knight of questing ploy
Awakened by a teenage shift
Eternity was set adrift.

And I still float upon the tide
And still without a clue to guide.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-04-09 09:47 AM

A keeper....

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-04-09 12:40 PM

The shock went through the hide of me
The groan that woke my manhood tree
The serge of magic adult power
That brought this youngster to flower.
===================================
Though petals fall much less than then
I still don’t have the slightest ken.

It turned me from the coyest boy
Into a knight of questing ploy
Awakened by a teenage shift
Eternity was set adrift.

And I still float upon the tide
And still without a clue to guide.
=====================================

ahhhh yes ...
the time when a young dragon learns how to fly and sigh and flame on high

*LOL*

"The shock went through the hide of me
The groan that woke my manhood tree
The serge of magic adult power
That brought this youngster to flower.

Though petals fall much less than then
I still don’t have the slightest ken."

You and Randy should write together more often cuz those lines are just WAY TOO COOL!!!

this is a very cool inspire Sy...

~Baby Randy~

Randy the Arteeeest

*winkiewinkie*

me

Looking hard into your eyes,
There was nobody I'd ever known.
Such an empty surprise ...
To feel so alone.
~jackson browne~

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-04-09 08:15 PM

lookie what I found for Randy *L*

*winkiewinkie*

... you better kiss me ... cause you're gonna miss me ... when I'm gone ...
"everything you do ... comes back on you".
~Karma~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-09 08:25 PM

excellent Sy. . . I really liked this one. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2001-04-09 08:33 PM

Sy..
I ALWAYS enjoy your work. I have no words.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-04-09 09:38 PM

JM,
Randy and I both thank you, what else can we say. Winkiewinkie

Sven,
That "really" says it all, thanks.

Temptress,
No words are good enough for me, thank you so much.

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