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- Forbidden Heart - |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Forbidden Heart Love to ashes dreams to dust, light to night heart to rust... innocence of spirit stolen in youth, release is forsaken darkness is truth, no voice of choice, desire, set aside, for this game of pain I do abide, affection's cleansing is feigned under misery's spell as I sink back into this shell of hell I'm the queen of ice, ruler of underworld's dark sleep, the need for companion arms smolders ever deep, yet, I do not chance love or romance, the wisp of cupid's wings in air is a foreign language to a heart that refuses to care unable to deciphor it's breath of peace, in the depths of beguilling torment, loneliness, without cease if you choose to embrace this heart of mine, lest you be aware... it may burn you over time with the sting of ice tainting your purity of feeling, for, this heart is not candycoated with sugar and spice, I am not made up of pearls or goldilock curls if the walls of my ruins could talk, their screams would puncture your ears... curseful shrill from the tears of captive years accompanied by symphony of skeletions in the closet of chill so, here's my heart in all it's glory, I am the ice queen, ruler of cold, mysterious nomad, unable to hold, no man before could read the hieroglyphics of it's uneven beat... unyielding code, do you gamble with defeat? black, cracked and decayed beyond measure of fix, failure will be yours, I've seen your bag of tricks, do you think you can win when I have rejected God's glue? here's my humpty dumpty heart, melt it... I dare you ~*By Melissa Honeybee*~ ***Thank you to Temptress for inspiring me to write this!*** |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mellisa, Well you scared me off. But I really enjoyed the read. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A well done poem, but I wouldn't recomend it as a way to get true love. Joyce |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Powerful images here, Melissa. Good write. All writing comes |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sir Sy - hehehe  then, my job is done! Thank you for reading~Joyce - Thanks! no, this is not the way to find true love, but, rather keep the unworthy/shady men at bay Lone Wolf - Thanks muchly, glad you enjoyed it  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Melissa~ the images you create are stunning.....spooky, but stunning Great writing!! SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow Melissa. . . powerful my friend. . . excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy, i know you too well and your heart is generous and kind, melt the ice yourself, you can do it! an excellent poem btw |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
WOW!  I LOVE this! The power is unavoidable, and thanks for the credit of inspiration! I had to go check the soure and I figured with my recent roamings in Dark it had to be in there! lol! Sorry for not reading this sooner. I enjoyed it! still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sea, Sven, Chels, and Jenn - thank you very much! I'm glad that you could feel and understand my words~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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