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Dark Poetry #3

Death Of A Heart

Second_Guess
Junior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 11

0 posted 2002-01-29 10:12 PM

Death Of A Heart

I watch this friendship die
Silently as it weeps
Arms outstretched
Begging to stay
Not to be deserted
It still slowly fades
Only the blood stained
Path of hurt and love
That led us to the
Demise and passing
Of hearts we once knew

[This message has been edited by Second_Guess (01-29-2002 10:13 PM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-01-29 10:32 PM

Nice writing of your feelings...James

Second_Guess
Junior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 11

2 posted 2002-01-29 11:11 PM

Thank you.~

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

3 posted 2002-01-29 11:18 PM

Sadly written but it also had a feeling of peace to it.
Then again, it might just be me,
one of them silent yet peaceful nights
here in the flat lands of Kansas

Mags

Don't cry because it's over: smile because it happened.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-02-04 10:05 AM

This was extremely sad but very well written..nicely done

BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE

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