Dark Poetry #3 |
I Am a Sinner |
Blaec Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 130The Sunshine State |
I've given into sin and back again. Then given in once more. But every time I go down that road I come back stronger than before. It's true that I've got holes in my flesh and ink in my skin. Did you ever stop to wonder about the person that I am within? So I ask you now Miss Holier than thou, are you claiming to be a saint? I'll be the first to gladly tell you if you think you are, you ain't. I read somewhere 'thou shall not pass judgment', I think it was in The Book. That's right i've read it. Now go away and take that condemning look. (stilll working on this one!) [This message has been edited by Blaec (edited 04-30-2001).] |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
Send that person packin!! lol...I like the way you are going with this. Keep working on it!! Dee "It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
my my my,this was profound,i relate so very much although not specifically to "It's true that I've got holes in my flesh and ink in my skin. Did you ever stop to wonder about the person that I am within?" it's the sentiment i share,this is a very good peice,incredibly enjoyable to read and just overall well done,if there are improvements to be made i can't spot them!! samantha¤ much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson |
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Blaec Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 130The Sunshine State |
Thank you both for taking the time to share your thoughts on this. I was a little unsure of it. Now I'm not! Thanks again! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
We all sin, it is only the good and the thinking that admit it!! And those that don't with their holier than thou are only to be pitied. Karma brings everyone's just deserts one day... Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I don't think I've ever met anyone who hasn't sinned! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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