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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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Angel, angel! Did you see me fall? Where once I could fly Now I only crawl Angel, angel! Do you hear me cry? Another lonely soul Lost, just passing by Angel, angel! Dare I count the cost? Consumed with pain, This heart is lost! Angel, angel! Why do you care? This heart is broken Damaged, beyond repair! Angel, angel! Won't you take me home? I can't go on like this Drifting, and alone! "I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
Great write, i always enjoy poems that even use the word angel, in the non religiouse sense anyway, good write!  "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great poem. I loved the rhythmic tone. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Your angel (whoever she may be spiritually speaking) is always with you and looking out for you. In that sense you are never alone. Beautiful piece hon and inspired my Love Goddesses poem thankyou!!  Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Eagle One, you write a heart wrenching verse! Just keep trying 'cuz angels have a way of showing up in unexpected places. Great as usual. Hugs, ME |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear EagleOne Well my friend this is just so wonderfully written and you know I had to come see it  I'll e you with further comments ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Ginners ~ It's always good to know others enjoy your work, thanks. Take care! Xeonox ~ Rhythm is something I'm not renowned for. Glad you enjoyed.Isis ~ Angels and Goddesses are certainly inspirational. There are times when I do forget that, but thankfully they don't last too long. Thanks, take care!M E ~ As you know I can only write what I feel. And I do intend to keep trying, experience has shown that angels do indeed pop up in the most unexpected places. Thanks for stopping by, take care!Tracie ~ Well you didn't "have to" come and see this, but I am glad you did. Take care!"I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
This was beautiful...and sad to me, You will find your angel*S* Temptress*Moon I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
I liked your poem very much. it has a wonderful rhythm to it.It flowed very well. Like a song. Suzanne |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thankfully you have an angel to pick you up and help dust you off... very nice writing EAGLE..  hugs, g PERFECTION has no CHARACTER... -unknown |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hi I liked! Angel angel on wings so fair carry me further to another place somewhere! Take care! ~ Tara ~ may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
First of all Eagle, you are never alone. Don't count that angel out yet!! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Temptress*Moon ~ yes, it is a mixture of emotions and I have no doubt I have indeed found my angel. Suzanne Arlene ~ well as long as I don't try and sing it we'll all be ok. G ~ Well I have been dusted off on one or two occasions so far..., thankyou! Tara ~ It is always good to know that you enjoy my ramblings, thanks. L W ~ You can never count an angel out my friend, take care! "I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You made me cry |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I loved your 2nd stanza. Well captured sadness. I'll echo Paula's tears. "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Eagle One my friend, This was superb, dazzling and Angelic. Your beautiful heart is showing! write on Kethry. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Always a pleasure to have you read my work, and I'm sorry for the tears, take care! "I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Eagle~ My heart aches for the pain in yours...sunshine and smiles are all that should ever lay within the walls of your golden heart my friend...Even in pain you write the most touching and amazing poetry...and don't argue with me  Hugs and Love to you Always~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Don't ache for me my friend, 'tis the pain that helps me to grow, along with the sunshine and smiles of course! Take care my friend! P.S. ..and you know I'd never argue with you, cause I know I'd never win! "I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Such beautiful words you weaved with this poem, I thought it was lovely. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Sue ~ Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed this, take care! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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