Dark Poetry #3 |
My Paradise Lost |
Lonely Shadow Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128Virginia |
My Paradise Lost Lying alone, crying silent tears as the love I once knew slowly disappears feeling my heart crumbling in my hands as the woman I once loved, turning away all alone in paradise, no friend to turn to my heartache and sorrow, my only companions my life slowly becomes meaningless as it has for so long now thoughts of death consume me wanting peace from the pain deep inside no more tears I will shed no more love will I feel My hope is, like her love for me, gone my happiness, a long lost memory Heartache after heartache suffering silently in my hotel bed knowing the bitter truth that my heart will never mend I will die as I have lived, a lonely shadow Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You may feel like you will die alone now, but you won't if you don't want to!! It's always up to you to make the myths and legends hon, no woman does that, you do!!! A sad picture painted here.. *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Yes, very depressing. But writing it out helps. Keep writing. |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
I Simply Melted away reading this poem Excellent picture you painted for us all... Temptress*Moon
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have expressed your despair well...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Well written and poignant. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
I know this feeling...God how I know this feeling... Very well written. G Regret not that which you have done, |
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