Dark Poetry #3 |
Truth |
Tobias New Member
since 2001-03-22
Posts 1USA |
Truth You can give me your mind, and your body if you choose, but spare us the pain of my eventual failure and leave your heart at home. 3/26/2001 Tobias |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Ouch. I compliment your ability to write so powerfully with so few words. Welcome! "Often the test of courage is not to die but to live" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Phew! Powerful stuff indeed, straight to the point. so much said in only few words Well Done, I enjoyed. Welcome to Passions, please check your email for a special greeting. Maree |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
WELCOME Great first post. I think you could probably add more to it, but nicely done just the same. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Excellent First post*S* Welcome Welcome to DP*S* Temptress*Moon
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Powerful, emotive, and honest, excellent! "I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Powerful words. Nicely written, welcome! "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Welcome! Loving this piece - short and sharp... K |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wow! power packed! Welcome. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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