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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Shards of weakness shred masses of might Warrior Wet fingers pick through whats left Stench and friction Remnants of fear Scattered minds Afraid A quiet city Empty now Hazy clouds from the torrential flames that burnt All is still Ash Lack of desire to say no Confide in themselves Never speak of the rashness of horror And accept life as not Hold another No need to rush Gather some sleep A chance for a wilted tomorrow Fade away Relax and sleep. a trickle of music from a well |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
good write, kind of reminds me of 9-11 "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I hadnt thought of that yet. Good observation. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
very nice, i liked all, the one part that sticks out to me the most is: "A quiet city Empty now Hazy clouds from the torrential flames that burnt All is still Ash" groovy bro. =) the whole thing was great! "The Red, it filters through" - Chevelle |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx River, I do my best. GIS |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Nice write GIS, still can see the bellowing smoke savoring the aftermath. Nice piece. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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