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blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO

0 posted 2003-09-18 03:24 AM


Macabre
The only word inside to describe me
The way I feel

Webster says grim
I suppose
More...
Suicidal
Suffocating
Myself
Bleeding
From wounds inflicted for death
Then drowning
Somewhere
In a mix of my own
Syrup-slick blood and sea-salt tears
Cried from these eyes of mine
Because you could never be kind
Kind enough.....
Nevermind.

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eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2003-09-18 12:38 PM


i am sorry...i wish people were kind to you... ...i liked this write

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2003-09-18 12:46 PM


People are jerks every now and then.  The last word "Nevermind" made me smile though.  
Just something about that word.....  Nice write.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

3 posted 2003-09-27 10:26 PM


very intensive write and emotional out-poor. The poetic vehicle always seems to do this best.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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