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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Black masked magicians Softly speaking in the shadows Pulling tricks out of their hats Sell their secrets to the floorboards Dimly light my air way With telex mathematic thoughts Brainwaves are just broken lines Smash through the pipeline Let the oil ridden reality seep in Why do my fingers melt into my hand? I cannot touch the unreal Dizzy, dancing, discothèque Self surpassing unsystematic seizure This is a work of dreams But I can smell the death here I can fear the stench here Heavy suited, symbolic metaphors Writing themselves around me My eyes deceive and I can’t believe That I’m dining with the dead Black masked magicians Plotting ways to make believe This is no longer a nightmare This is a life mare, super-glare, are you over there? I am the rabbit inside the hat They’re pulling me out Making me jump for the insects I do not like the way this feels Can I chose candy cyanide? Why do my eyes melt into my head? ‘Cause I don’t want to see this again Interpolate my life precisely So I can un-intoxicate my cerebrum Give me fifteen minutes And I’ll shake myself to sleep |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
wow, very interesting, reminds me of a few dreams i have had myself...and of this "lifemare" that we are all trapped in at some point in time. Good Job =). |
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Maddy vanD Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 99Newfoundland, Canada |
Neat!!! Maddy |
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Insomniac Cat Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 69The Land of the Dadaists |
Good job, I likes! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ryan: this is amazing . . . put it to music sounds like a rap excellent writing, m'friend xxoo |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Thank you everyone for your responces, they mean alot to me. There is just something about knowing that other people have read the things you write and that maybe in some small miniscule way you have had an effect on them. Thank you all. |
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