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mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2003-09-16 08:16 AM

Like before - I can hear,
those caroling sounds
of delightful pleasure
and unyielding anger.
This place for both,
where memory is lost
between the lines,
And once,
we’re we came from.
Is only known by who we are now.
Soon time will become my shelter.
As this stay delivers - another
reason why
perfection does exist.
Like before,
I’ll play as the trumpets entertain:
Waiting --
Till the music’s over. Once again.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (09-17-2003 08:33 AM).]

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

1 posted 2003-09-18 02:00 AM

great write as always...but i guess my mind is warped, i am gonna have to disagree, perfection does not exist...not to take anything away from your writing cause it rocks...but that is my thought

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2003-09-18 02:01 AM

p.s. wonder why i am the first post adn this was posted days ago??????????

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

3 posted 2003-09-18 11:33 AM

Hey eor, thanks again. I was worried about being shut-out, ( sort of like the Red Sox's were last night ). Maybe I'm slacken a bit? Thanks again for saving the shut-out.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

4 posted 2003-09-18 08:22 PM

SURE THING!!!!!!! :Backtotop:
they took my smiley aay

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

[This message has been edited by eor (09-18-2003 08:24 PM).]

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

5 posted 2003-09-19 11:41 AM

eor, your the best. A poet's friend for all poet's. Maybe I'll take a break for awhile. Catch you later man, and thanks again.-- poe.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-09-19 12:11 PM

poe, dont go please . . .
I completely understand this, but not until this time in my life , as it always seems:

And once,
we’re we came from.
Is only known by who we are now.

YES EXACTLY!
beautiful writing
xxoo

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

7 posted 2003-09-19 04:00 PM

Wonderful write...wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.

click1
Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 152
usa

8 posted 2003-09-25 06:12 PM

I really like this one...It has...what?..Uh, made me slow down and think..Thank You "Peo"...
Thanx!!

Click

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

9 posted 2003-09-26 08:06 PM

littlewing, your lasting benevolent aura becomes you, and I thank you!

Mad_Hatter, thank you for the very kind response - much appreciated. Thanks again.

click1, Thank you so much for stopping by. I glad you enjoyed. Thanks again.

Thanks to ALL of you very much, and another thanks to you again, eor.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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