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eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

0 posted 2003-09-16 12:58 PM

determinative
adulatory control
cosmically stroll
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toadstool abstinence
milord eland clannishness
rosewater magnate
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providence dartboard
infallibly warrant blues
humiliation
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hygienically
gaudily vegetarian
loyalist seamy
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tract kerchief playgroup
inauguration stonework
terminology

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

1 posted 2003-09-16 09:22 AM

hmmm... haiku, very wild my man,
experimenting? Enjoyed.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2003-09-16 12:12 PM

Dude this is cool as crap*. Write like this more often. Add.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

3 posted 2003-09-18 01:47 AM

thanks guys but i guess nobody else like it...no more fun eiht dictonaries for me

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

4 posted 2003-09-18 02:56 AM

I LOVE haiku!!!!! And these are great! I like the one about milord... uhm..

Just ignore me. I haven't been here in a while.

But I'm glad I didn't miss this, I was excited to see a post w/ ur name!
~Alicia

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2003-09-18 03:51 AM

Amazing work.. I must ponder..

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

6 posted 2003-09-18 12:50 PM

"No more fun with dictionaries for me" We dont need no education...... right. lol

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

7 posted 2003-09-20 09:54 PM

"We don't need no education...hey..teacher...leave us kids alone!!!" lol

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

Insomniac Cat
Member

since 2003-09-23

Posts 69
The Land of the Dadaists

8 posted 2003-09-23 12:16 PM

Awesome! I like your style! I'd like to see more of these.

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

9 posted 2003-09-24 09:25 AM

Great but how do you do it Maggie

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-09-24 05:15 PM

Matt - love to see experimentation
*smile*
(pulling out dictionary myself)
nice job
xxoo

click1
Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 152
usa

11 posted 2003-09-25 06:25 PM

Nice job! *tips hat* I like the style you got the words to go into...Squirmy little buggers, no?

Click

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

12 posted 2003-09-26 12:07 PM

congrads u have officially left a stupid highschooler feeling even stupider

nice work i likes how you did it...now if you excuse me, me and my little brain need a few hours to recuperate from straining to comprehend all of those lavish bigg fancy pansy words. lol. bleh myabe i jsut need to get smoe seelp =). lovin it dude!

"The Red, it filters through" - Chevelle

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

13 posted 2003-09-27 05:03 PM

Very intelligently written, I once again salute you. Your poems truly do reach me on a strong emotional level, thank you.

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