Dark Poetry #3 |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa ![]() |
stare helpless at the hand figure it's geometry the leverage is all wrong it can't work the way it should stupid flesh stupid stupid flesh never married to this steel properly wood feels good but that is illusion awkward angles will kill despair's hope go instead go look at the dung-eyed wonder in the poetry of mirrors small insignificant little bug with nobody to squash you |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bri - dont you dare make me look at myself! Goddd . . . scary . . . *smile* insignificant? no but I understand xxoo |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Nice metaphors, nice write. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
If you are a beetle, I must be the dung... smile. And I wanted to be on top, too. *pout* sigh. missing you hard right now... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Smiling at you...and chuckling at Karen...smile Very cool, Bri...love this... Hugging you both... ![]() When the power of love overcomes the |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
this needs to breathe . . . |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
stupid stupid flesh Loved that. Susan |
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