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Brigid WillowKeeper
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since 2003-08-24
Posts 88
OHIO IN USA

0 posted 2003-09-12 06:03 PM



I hope the moderator doesn't find this too violent, as it doesn't have too much gore or anything...

Eat You Alive
(A Metal Song By Me)

The bell tolls
The crow falls

The raven's ever shining
darkness

The blood drips
He had his kicks

The raven's ever calling
darkness

(chorous)
He'll eat you alive!
He'll drink you alive!
He'll end your pain and strife,
Cause he'll eat you alive!

Till you're dead

I smell it
It's the raven

He's ever lurking in
darkness

He calls you
He wants you

The raven hungers in
darkness

He askes me
To make you bleed

I'm ever shining
darkness

(chorous 2)
I'll eat you alive!
I'll drink you alive!
I'll end your pain and strife,
Cause I'll eat you alive!

Till you're dead

(repeat Chorous 2x)
(repeat chorous 2-2x)

Till you're dead

Till you're dead

Till
You're
Dead!

And you will weep
When you face THE END alone
You are lost
You can never go home

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-09-13 09:14 AM


hmm the mods?
ohh that must be me!
no, I see what your saying, I mean the raven is known for such things . . .
You have written this?
Put it to music please . . .
xxoo

Brigid WillowKeeper
Member
since 2003-08-24
Posts 88
OHIO IN USA
2 posted 2003-09-13 09:25 PM


I don't have a particular tune to compare it to, just one that came up in my head, imagine screaming metal music...yeah, there you go.
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