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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Seconds and hours Sing unheard Massive roar None hear Silence Push draw-string Flying Sky dive Empty sack Down forever Justify False notation Implied denial Shrinking strenght No will power Constant motion Eat a brick Stop Out Complete The trusty falsehood From the heart Blistered back Cant say Didnt try Full Rage Sickness Struggle Health Drug content Itchy stomache Dizzy brain Flattened ego Easy release Pointless Pull Stick Loosen Massacre Silence Comfort Choose Heard them fall Conscious dead Marble white Pure Real Stuffy Beautiful begin eternity a trickle of music from a well |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
this is gooood...wonder why this had gotten so little attention "There never was a genius without a tincture of madness." |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
Even more choppy then usual, but still effective. "Eat a brick" Loved this line. Great, but not your best. ~Lex  |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thanx eor, i was assuming possibly a boycot. lol Thanx Lexy, Ill try harder next time. GIS |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Craig, this reminded me of freefalling kinda like a parachute with no pullchord Nice job xxoo |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx littlewing, It does seem to have that feel to it. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
i hope it is not a boycot, if it is, it is only because they don't understand such a great writer "There never was a genius without a tincture of madness." |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
yeah thanx man. a trickle of music from a well |
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