navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #3 » Discarded Depressives
Dark Poetry #3
Post A Reply Post New Topic Discarded Depressives Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
symphony_of_thoughts
Member
since 2003-08-03
Posts 95
Somewhere

0 posted 2003-09-12 04:28 PM


Those feelings were so bad
They took me down for no reason
But somehow introspecting
I must infer something now
The basic essence in those
Those feelings plaguing me
Adulterating my mind at the time
Are now gone and I might wish
That they could maybe show up again
Midnight package left upon my porch
Maybe God is the mailman, or maybe
Just the tangled web of my bizarre design
I wish now to grace their presence
But final contact might prove trecherous
So warily I must approach to not be shocked
And disconnecting would be too late after a taste
I have to give a try to feel those feelings
For the good or for the bad in them

© Copyright 2003 symphony_of_thoughts - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-09-13 03:14 PM


symphony . . .
contentment is sometimes hard to dicard
these lines are priceless:

Midnight package left upon my porch
Maybe God is the mailman, or maybe
Just the tangled web of my bizarre design
nice writing
xxoo

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #3 » Discarded Depressives

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary