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Not Knowing |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Not Knowing You say I am arrogant Of my demise you chant All I do in your eyes is rant Well see the truth you can't Leave the human mind to not knowing Angst, and anxiety will be showing Hurt, and pain and anger will be flowing When you leave the mind to Not know- ing. *My pain is always your Ice cream cone! Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Neat how you formed the picture! and the message it conveyed. Sad when someone finds pleasure from our pain. I liked this. Thank you for all your kinds reviews, as well.  |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
 Endlessecho, and thank you. You are very welcome. It is my pleasure!   SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-11-2003 04:06 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Shara! A form poem! very cool . . . have never done this awesome job xxoo |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Hey Littlewings...words that are much appreciated!! and bless ya bunches!  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
visuals sometimes help get the point across so much better, but even wihtout this was a great poem! "There never was a genius without a tincture of madness." |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thank you eor...I appreciate your words. You are sweet. I didn't set out to do the visual it started shaping up to be a cone and then it came to mind how this person sees my pain as something sweet to him. So I made the statement about it being like ice cream to him. Some say it like icing on the cake. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Leave the mind to not knowing. A bundle of wisdom here. Nice write. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thank you Mysticpoe for seeing there is some wisdom in this. If you leave the human mind to not knowing it can imagine all sorts of the worst. That I would not do to someone. I would feel if I can do something to settle any questions within them who am I to withold if I can be of help?? It's not paranoid...that's just this persons scapegoat psycho babble to excuse what HE witholds. Trying to justify his actions to be a balm for his soul. If it makes him feel better that's all that matters to him, because if it helps me he will withold it, becuase he said he would. Sooo hence that's why I say just leave me alone. HE is the one that CHOOSES not to leave it. Then he goes around telling people (I) won't leave him alone. If you keep taunting a person they aren't going to disappear. They will try to find out why the other keeps tormenting them and try to settle it. Make sense? Or sounds like paranoia? I have NEVER, not once asked this person to stay with me and HE knows it. Thank you! SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-15-2003 10:14 PM).] |
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