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Starsfalling
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since 2003-03-18
Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows

0 posted 2003-09-14 08:15 PM



Follow…
I’ll lead upon a summer day,
To a place of rest
Where one never wakens..
In the grand land of Morpheus,
And the wonderful lotus
Dream, dream
Upon a bed on night…
With the wonderful scent,
And beautiful sight…
Of your own death
Slow, peaceful
Just lay and let lay
In a place of endings…

-lance

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

© Copyright 2003 Lance Keber - All Rights Reserved
mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

1 posted 2003-09-14 09:50 PM


You had me drifting. I understand this. Good write.
mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Lexy
Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
2 posted 2003-09-15 05:25 PM


This was beautiful and peaceful. Yet dark, but a comforting kind of darkness, like when you awake and realize you have an hour more to sleep. This was amazing. I was fully emerced in your words.
~Lex  

[This message has been edited by Lexy (09-15-2003 05:25 PM).]

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