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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-09-02 03:04 AM

Running through my
dirty
past..

I corner thought as
my prisoner..
feelings burst as
red flower in
palm of
ivory white hand.

Like blood
splattered on
quiet wall.
You pound in waves..
you do
speak.

Not many
can
see
it.

Very few are allowed...
Inside the mind
of
where peace
is born.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-09-02 06:08 AM

ahhh Meg, yess yesss
this is brilliant
not many no, if any right?
I love this and the metaphors
are astounding!
Great write
xxoo

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-09-02 08:59 AM

Meghan~
This is lovely~

'where peace
is born'

I treasure this thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

3 posted 2003-09-02 10:01 AM

"Like blood spattered on quiet wall."
I love this line.
Wow, excellent job Karou! amazingly done.
Bravo!!!
~Lex

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2003-09-02 07:39 PM

Im not going to disagree with anybody. This is an excellent {Im not sure how to spell excellent. Thats almost as bad as misspelling perfect. hehe. Ah my spelling sux. Id better stop before I just ruin this entire page.} I liked.

Craig

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

5 posted 2003-09-03 01:39 PM

Such a very interesting write. Thank you for sharing. Maggie

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

6 posted 2003-09-03 04:28 PM

my gates are slammed and locked shut as well...lovley write as always!!! adding this

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

7 posted 2003-09-04 09:44 AM

Really enjoy your thoughts and how they weave, using both sides of the coin as you make your statements thru your writing. Very good.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2003-09-04 05:29 PM

This one hurts.

Lady Godiva
Junior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 35
at the bottom of your glass

9 posted 2003-09-04 05:36 PM

I feel this aching pain...yes brillant..*hugs*

Joe Houck
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 324
california

10 posted 2003-09-16 05:04 AM

This is a very striking.
"I corner thought as
my prisoner.."
a feat I strive to accomplish everyday.
I liked the style of this poem as well.
You are a very talented writer..
Joe

"The worst vice is advice" (Al Pacino, devil's advocate)

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