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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-09-11 12:57 PM

Its like a gentle damp light
Constrution from percision splits in the lower back
Exactly what I wanted and
The illegal glow thick in cash

Develope nicely
Hard unbroken and command
Concentrate on project by hand
Leaving no process unturned

Its when it swallows the air around
That it seems to be a way of life
Profound and admired of spirit

This work comes from shaky walls
And an imitation of reality

Pleasure and enjoyment electric view

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-09-11 01:57 PM

Itchy, I'm not sure what this means, but thanks for sharing. I like reading you and figuring it all out. One part I kind of (thought) I might know what it means, but not sure of it.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2003-09-11 09:58 PM

music...could this be about music? My interpretation anyhow. I like your poetry, its adaptable, its a good thing. I like how often you post, I write so much it's crazy. Its good to know someone writes and thinks as hard as I do.
~Lex

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-09-12 02:10 AM

Craig, I do not know why but this reminded me of the street . . .
you know . . . the life - the power
the buzz:

Its when it swallows the air around
That it seems to be a way of life

YES . . . nice job
xxoo

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2003-09-12 01:05 PM

Shara- thanx its basically about pretty much any of the performing arts or visual.

Lexy- thanx. Yeah and actually I dont get a whole lot of time to be on-line anymore, but I do what I can.

littlewing- thanx. I hadnt intented for it to be that way but it does have that ring to it.

Craig

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

5 posted 2003-09-13 08:02 PM

you know i am ver amazed from your writing, you have come such a long way in a little bit of time, i remember one fo your first posts, you are not even a shadow of the writer you used to be. great wirte.

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

6 posted 2003-09-14 02:20 PM

Wow. Thanx. I'm not sure what to think.

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

7 posted 2003-09-14 10:08 PM

Electric view. Never heard that before. I really like it. Brings sparks to the poem. Nice write.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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