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Ivy
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since 2003-09-08
Posts 7
0 posted 2003-09-09 03:55 PM

"Fairy Tale"

I used to dream of Fairy Tales
Sitting in from the rain
Never had I thought this idea seemed so lame
Now I feel as if I am going insane.
My castle could use some work,
And my Prince is very plain.
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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
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1 posted 2003-09-09 09:51 PM

Never had I thought this idea seemed so lame

The idea is good. But the ryhme could use some help. Nice start though. Proceed and amaze us, and yourself. welcome!
~Lex
ShannonMarie
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since 2003-09-09
Posts 55
in a state of being
2 posted 2003-09-10 10:34 PM

it is a good start though I feel that you could add to it.  Keep up the good work and since I am new here too.. WELCOME!
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