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Dark Poetry #3

Redundant Dream.

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

0 posted 2003-09-06 01:33 PM

I open my eye
to a cold grey dawn.
A tentative toe
touches the floor.
quickly pulled to the
blankets once more.

No guilt.
No alarms,
the bed holds me
tight in its soft
cosy arms.

I drift
I doze.
Could stay here
all day if I chose.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-09-06 02:26 PM

Yes, I know the feeling. You protrayed it well. Made me want to crawl back to bed..I especially liked this part:
"A tentative toe
touches the floor.
quickly pulled to the
blankets once more."

~Lex

[This message has been edited by Lexy (09-06-2003 02:26 PM).]

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

2 posted 2003-09-06 03:48 PM

Thank you Lexy. I am living my dream. Redundant I mean. Maggie

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2003-09-06 06:34 PM

Wouldn't it be nice if we could dream this dream forever, snug and warm in a womblike experience.

Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

4 posted 2003-09-07 08:54 AM

ooooooohKethry Maggie

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-09-07 10:20 AM

Maggie, me too , mann I just despisegetting out of bed
I loved this
xxoo

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

6 posted 2003-09-07 12:45 PM

Thank you Littlewing, it is a drag isn't it. Maggie

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