Dark Poetry #3 |
Emerald Isle |
cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
The snort of the burrow disturbed by fleas in the early dawn light Fragrant smells of peat fires. Hedgerows heavy with May spleandour. To tramp alone through deserted fells, catch sight of Croax Patrick looming through the mist, scaled by hordes of sinners praying for redemption. Many varied greens evoke primeval longings, to be near my forefathers in my beautiful Emerald Isle. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Where the sweet emerald breeze trolls endless rolling pastures, welcoming the majestic shoreline of Irish green. Very nice write Maggie. I owed you one. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
And may you be in heaven before the ndevil knows that your'e dead, Misticpoe. Maggie |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Maggie, That's always been my ace in the hole. The Best. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is another great poem from you. i really wish i could read all your work but sadly time does not permit me. but keep up the great work anyway for others to enjoy. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you Jeremiah,Love your mame by the way.Maggie |
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Maddy vanD Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 99Newfoundland, Canada |
I rather enjoyed this piece, I am a partly of Irish descent, am a great fan of Irish music and beer. My fella is also Irish, I have never been to the emerald isle, but have always wanted to one day, and your poem only enhances that desire. |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Maddy, thank you. You would love it despite what you hear of the fighting it is the last traqualiser in the world. Don@ go if you like to hurry. Practice walking with a snail and you will get my meaning. Maggie |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Maggie, my goodness is my very dream . . . this is beautiful xxoo |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Littlewing, I love your replies. Maggie |
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