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Dark Poetry #3

what you do

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

0 posted 2003-09-05 03:46 PM

I don't think you understand this concept yet
that what you do hurts me too
sticking pins in your arms
I don't want those arms that hold me
to bleed by your own hand
I don't want you to hurt inside
even though I know you won't admit it
somehow I understand you must hurt too
You tell me not to do such things
that hurt and bleed and damage me
but you would do the same
and hurt me anyway
your pain is my own
When you're unhappy so am I
please don't do this to me
I love you I need you I want you
but I can't stay by you
if you keep hurting me like this
your pain is my pain
your joy is my joy
wrap me close in your healed arms
'cause I love you

I am the Blue~Phoenix and I don't care what you say that won't change. I am who I am as you are who you are.

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-09-05 05:44 PM

"but I can't stay by you
if you keep hurting me like this."

These two lines speak volumes. It says much with so little words. I have felt this for so long, but it's not heard and rec'd. I hope your words are, I know how much it hurts not to be heard. Here's hoping all gets better for you and your love soon.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

ForeverPoetic
Junior Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 28
Streaming down a tranquil sea

2 posted 2003-09-05 07:41 PM

wow! this poem goes to the heart well thought of. I think it reminds people to realize that every action has a complete reaction. Thus making people think about what they have done to other people in their lives.

GREAT POEM

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