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| Dark Poetry #3 |
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My Soul |
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iMMuNe Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49Maine, USA |
So much pain and anger, The threat of a man- a stranger, Yet little did we know he stole, What was so important to the soul- my soul. His role, Was an unbeliever, A deceiver in thoughts, The Devils retreiver. He blackened the heart, Changed my mind tinted it with dark, Trying to fight what I could not, See, hear, or feel- he left me to rot. Days and weeks go by, The torment of voices inside, Lied to- denied, Afraid to seek the light for it may make me blind. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
The poem expresses feelings of submission, while at the same time, needing to break - away from the same. Enjoyed the write, some nice metaphoric references. myticpoe If nothing is something |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Immune . . . I know EXACTLY what you mean had the light taken from my own eyes too *hugs* amazing writing xxoo |
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iMMuNe Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49Maine, USA |
I'm glad someone can relate to, what some called a difficult write. Although, I encourage many people to reply and tell me how good my poem was- it honestly dont happen much. Not sure if it is due to no talent or just im not a regular around here..*shrugs* Thanks for the replies. |
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