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ForeverPoetic
Junior Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 28
Streaming down a tranquil sea

0 posted 2003-09-05 12:08 PM



We met on the dance floor
five minutes later I wanted you forever

I opened my heart and went through the door
Spilling your love only to fufill your sore

Blinded by the light of love
You ruined my life like shooting a dove

Now as I sit and ponder
You say you dont want to wonder

You say you want nothing more
Yet you kiss my like im your lover

I am forgotten like a meal not wanted and ditched
All I ever wanted was to be kissed

© Copyright 2003 James - All Rights Reserved
teenpoet
Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan
1 posted 2003-09-05 03:48 PM


Oh hun I'm sorry.  That sounds terribly disheartening.  I've had the same sort of thing happen to me before too.  You wrote about it well.

I am the Blue~Phoenix and I don't care what you say that won't change. I am who I am as you are who you are.

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2003-09-05 05:07 PM



Welcome to Passions, where all can be yours
in poetic read, and passionate inquire.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-09-05 07:45 PM


Wonderful entrance post.
Welcome to Passions...
I'm sure you will love it here.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
   I still have sand in my shoes ~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-09-05 10:09 PM


ahh Forever . . . yes indeed
Wecome to PIP!
Nice entrance and welcome to the
dark forum
xxoo

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