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Dark Poetry #3

Stalked and Shadowed

Mor-Estal Landis
Junior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 10
Luca, Ventoren

0 posted 2003-09-05 08:35 AM

Feeling for my pusle,
Making sure I'm living.

Feet draggin' on the floor,
I realize now 'God' aint so forgiving.

My face is all pale,
My eyes a light blue.

My mind is set to rot,
I don't know what to do.

I'm shadowed by darkness,
And stalked by despair.

You say I need help,
But don't nobody care.

This is actually an excert from another of my poems 'Dead Now'. But it's alot like the first one I posted.

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

1 posted 2003-09-05 09:11 AM

Hey
nice write.
Keep writin' you know you're good at it. Better than I at the least.
Luv ya
Blue~Phoenix

I don't know what I did wrong but the fae are after me now. Faeries can be so irritable.

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

2 posted 2003-09-05 10:56 AM

Would like to see this finished. Getting excited. Nice write.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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