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Mor-Estal Landis
Junior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 10
Luca, Ventoren

0 posted 2003-09-05 08:35 AM



Feeling for my pusle,
Making sure I'm living.

Feet draggin' on the floor,
I realize now 'God' aint so forgiving.

My face is all pale,
My eyes a light blue.

My mind is set to rot,
I don't know what to do.

I'm shadowed by darkness,
And stalked by despair.

You say I need help,
But don't nobody care.

This is actually an excert from another of my poems 'Dead Now'. But it's alot like the first one I posted.

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teenpoet
Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan
1 posted 2003-09-05 09:11 AM


Hey
nice write.
Keep writin' you know you're good at it.  Better than I at the least.
Luv ya
Blue~Phoenix

I don't know what I did wrong but the fae are after me now. Faeries can be so irritable.

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

2 posted 2003-09-05 10:56 AM


Would like to see this finished. Getting excited. Nice write.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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