Dark Poetry #3 |
Past Present and Future |
ForeverPoetic Junior Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 28Streaming down a tranquil sea |
Past Present and Future Should i be happy that were just friends? Or sad because thats all it will ever be You say you cant be with me Yet you kiss countless guys to relieve your dignity To me this is bad as can be I have no one in reality In fantasy you are my lover Past present and future Stars, though unseen on dark nights. Are still there, just hidden away. Twinkling, winking at us, and laughing at our dismay |
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RioTgUrL New Member
since 2003-08-25
Posts 8 |
awwwwwwwwwwww.....nice poem...and cheer up! post more! O_O love from RioTgUrL...Cali. |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Stand up and be counted. Find another. Maggie |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
James yes defintely agreeing with Maggie here . . . you deserve much better xxoo |
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cuda04 Junior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 46Wisconsin,USA |
This was great, I really did feel it...but watch your punctuation Always look forward, never look back, dreams are much more refreshing than regrets. |
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