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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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tears drop down off my eyes time goes on by nothing to do no where to turn want to find a place to burn thoughts haunt me all through the night i no longer put up a fight. carefully tread the stepping stones. trying to find my home panic terror begins to set in. i don't know where this path ends of begins. lost in the woods of my mind going through the halls of despire wanting just someone to care. crawl into a hole and ponder what to do and what is out there shoulders back head high. i push on just to survive Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
You know what there's not a single person that hasn't felt this way just hang on, very good write. |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
thank you Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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ShadowRaven Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 51 |
This is very nice, very nice indeed. |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
thank tis my constant battle lol Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good for you Julie, this feels like a panic attack awesome writing xxoo |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
if i can make you feel like your having a panic attack is that a good thing? lol  Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Very real. The emotions came across very well for a feeling so common to everyone. You presented it nicely. |
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