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teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan

0 posted 2003-08-26 10:11 AM


Crypts open to entrance
Night fiends are waking now
Which way werewolves run
When confronted with
Two sources of fresh blood
Tears breaking through
Skin barely there
Dead creatures walking
Bones creaking
Thoughts breaking
All is lost when
Humans see the truth
Of Night

© Copyright 2003 Alicia Adams - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-08-26 07:53 PM


Alicia . . .
so true, what exactly does occur upon our sleeping hours?
nice write
xxoo

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-08-27 01:43 PM


In the night all sorts of creepy stuff comes out doesn't it. You are so right. Kinda gives me a chill.. That's those times I want someone to hold on to, but the scariest is the stuff inside our head.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan
3 posted 2003-09-04 10:17 AM


By the way I think I should dedicate this poem to Mor-Estal Landis.  He belongs to the night and I don't know...I don't think I've ever dedicated anything to him before.

I don't know what I did wrong but the fae are after me now. Faeries can be so irritable.

[This message has been edited by teenpoet (09-05-2003 03:38 PM).]

blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
4 posted 2003-09-05 02:58 PM


Eeeek!!!!!  I like this a lot.  Do YOU believe??  This was well composed.  Great job!  You can e-mail me if you'd like to get to know me better @ fallingintohell@hotmail.com  
Later girl.
Alicia

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