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Dark Poetry #3

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Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-09-03 10:32 PM

darkness falls
my skin begins
to grow cold
and icy.

the snow melts
as it hits my
forehead.

deep within
burning in my
soul. feel
as if i am
growing old

the tress
sway in the
frosty air
so quiet so
calm like
there is
now one
there but
me.

release
me i say
set me free
take my heart
away toss
it in the air

return in
back to me
when i learn
how to take
care.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

1 posted 2003-09-04 10:00 AM

Nice write here. Your thoughts are formed well.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-09-04 10:24 PM

Julie, this feeling right here:

the tress
sway in the
frosty air
so quiet so
calm like
there is
now one
there but
me.

is beauty
awesome writing
xxoo

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

3 posted 2003-09-05 02:20 AM

Thank you so much

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

4 posted 2003-09-05 04:56 PM

"take my heart
away toss
it in the air

return it
back to me
when i learn
how to take
care."

That is really neat. What a thought!

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