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Rejecting reflection
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Rejecting reflection |
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Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
I can't look into the mirror lately Im nothing that I wanted to be I can't get beyond what it is I see fire in my eyes as shadows stalk me I know I can't go back in time no matter what I do I'll never be able to rewind so I'll walk past the mirror convincing myself that Im just fine... |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
you are just fine, life goes on...good write "There never was a genius without a tincture of madness." |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Nice, conveying feelings that most of us have. Like offering the question. What is more important, the beauty that we see or the beauty that they see? mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Paragon . . ughhh I know . . . you are just fine and I know easy for me to say, right? I know how you feel nice write xxoo |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Very relatable. But who are we really fooling? I like the words you used and how you presented them to convey these feelings. Enjoyed the read! |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
In a way, we cannot change what we become, we can only fight and try and reinvent ourselves. I too look in the mirror and see a failure, but i cannot regret the choices I made, because any choice i make is a part of me and to deny that choice is to deny a part of myself. Wonderful words...wonderful. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
I hate mirrors, not because I dislike how, I look, its just too much reality to bear sometimes. These are honest thoughts...I felt your words. Nicely conveyed.  ~Lex |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
an honest poem that reflects your feelings. I would only worry when all your mirrors are covered or smashed. *grin Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
ah so sad, but never reject just remember the inside is truly where the beauty is, as we get older we realize this even more, great write. |
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Angel101¢¾! Junior Member
since 2007-10-21
Posts 48Lost in pain |
Very good write! r u a dude or dudet? how old r u? Just so u know im not a stalker!!! |
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