Dark Poetry #3 |
So you called to tell me how nice the wedding was.... |
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Tears contained Filling lung How long must I pretend Not to drown? Silent scream Imploding head How long must I smile In death? Stagnated blood Collapsing vein How long must I breath In burn? Flog of skin Bare to bone How I long To be happy Without you |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Susan I KNOW this feeling, I feel it.. Wonderful write..as always, love. |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
I feel your pain, this just happened to me. you will be happy again just takes time. Thankx for sharing |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Liked very much... I was thinking of our daughter though... but it fits purrrrfectly. dale |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
*groan* it is painful to see ones old work... but thank you for looking and actually liking.. and hugs to your daughter, it does heal. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" ~Unknown~ |
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