Dark Poetry #3 |
Hot Lips |
RennieandBoo Junior Member
since 2003-09-02
Posts 47Florida! |
Such lips, what fine beauties they are they can Poison a mans soul with just one touch and yet... surges Your heart and burn fire into it... So for I am still a virgin and have not tasted a Pair of such fine wine of a lips I remain unseen, and a Heart that burns so cool... |
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ShadowRaven Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 51 |
title reminds of a character from M*A*S*H. but onto the poem - I like it. Kissing can be very powerful, some you remember and some . . well some you wish you didn't [This message has been edited by ShadowRaven (09-03-2003 02:02 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahh Rennie . . . one day it will sneak up on you . . . the real thing when you arent looking . . . hold fast to those thoughts missy please . . . *smile* beautiful writing xxoo |
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jbsoria Junior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 26Phoenix, Arizona |
I actually felt that one. Great job expressing yourself and your feelings. |
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