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SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-08-24 01:46 PM


Push Me?


Push me,
in a corner?
Push me,
to the side?
Think again..
I won't live your sin
and
I
WON'T
wear your lies.
Your blues skies
weren't
my
respondsibility
But still
I tried,
and
tried.
And
All you could do,
All you could muster,
was a wish
I would die.
What are you?
What kind
does it take
to want to make a person
into pieces
break?
What,
What were you
going to do?
Did you do as you always do
Laugh as you picked up
the shards?
Count my tiny little pieces
like so many cards?
Well play with a full deck
You did not
When you could harm
and then turn around
laugh while you say
What the heck.
Push me
in a corner?
Push me
to the side.
Think again,
Think real hard
No way
Will I
ever
hide!



Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

© Copyright 2003 Shara - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-08-24 05:10 PM


Good for you Shara!
nice vent
xxoo

eor
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2 posted 2003-08-24 11:56 PM


and you should never hide!!

great write terri, loved the fighting words, so raw, powerful, loved it!!

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-08-25 09:17 AM


Little Wings--Thank you for understanding. You are always so sweet to read, and comment. Bless ya for being so kind. Big

Eor--Thank you for your words to encourage!  I haven't seen you here for a while. I hope you write again. I miss reading you. It's so nice to see you here in my comment box!! I was so surprised to see you today. Big

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Kaoru
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4 posted 2003-08-25 10:05 AM


you tell 'em!
cusick
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5 posted 2003-08-25 10:30 AM


I have replied to this before but it must have got lost. Stand up and be counted Shararose. Brilliant verse. Maggie
SharaRose
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6 posted 2003-08-25 04:55 PM


Thanks Kaoru, and Cusick...I appreciate your words to encourage. My emotions got carried away. I get so hurt, and couldn't contain it. Sorry I put all you through that, but thanks for being so forgiving. Brought a tear to my eyes that you would be so forgiving. Big

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inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2003-08-27 11:11 PM


this hits hard, good work
SharaRose
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8 posted 2003-08-28 09:18 AM


Thank you Inkedgoddess...that means alot coming from you.


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qtpieelmo
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9 posted 2003-09-01 01:06 AM


WoW!! I Love This!!
I love the form, I love the message, I love it all!!

ELMO

"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!"

SharaRose
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10 posted 2003-09-01 11:21 AM


Thanks qtpie my emotions is what I write from. I am glad you enjoyed!!

Bless ya bunches,
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Lil OnE
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11 posted 2003-09-02 04:48 PM


Hell yeah!! I love this and can relate to it so so much. Good for you! Great write. Maybe I should share this with that shoving person... Great write!!

"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the only one who is will never make me cry"
~Lil OnE!~


SharaRose
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12 posted 2003-09-02 05:01 PM


Hi, Lil One.. I am sorry you can relate to this...I wish you didn't have to feel this, but I hope it helped in some way. Sending a BIG and a


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ShadowRaven
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13 posted 2003-09-03 01:57 AM


wonderful read
SharaRose
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14 posted 2003-09-03 04:35 AM


Thank you Shadow Raven... I am glad you liked.


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