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Dark Poetry #3

Funky Man Jack

TwoSided
Junior Member

since 2003-07-06

Posts 19

0 posted 2003-08-28 11:04 PM

I feel my soul rasping gentle tapping at my heart
He wants out of his shell and into the world
I’m telling him slowly breaken it to him gently
“ Ya gotta stay back man, can’t come out yet man”
Sulking away from me he cruse’s slivery wings tainted gray
Poor old fellow cannot stand to waste another day
“Come on buddy don’t be cross” I’m trying to ease myself back into his grace
He’s not looken at me; he doesn’t want to face his capture
“Can’t blame him,” I think down heartedly,
He’s my broken heart, my weeping soul, my aching womb,
Jack I call him Ace he calls himself
My man in black my sprit gone wack.
That’s my funky a@# Jack.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-08-29 01:10 AM

Two - is this your other half?
of you , I mean
got me thinking here you did
xxoo

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-08-29 07:23 AM

sounds like you two make a whole,
clever work

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