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Lexy
Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2003-08-26 10:06 PM


Troubled sky,
lets meet together and rememinise.
Maybe you could pull a smile up from my mouth.
Maybe I could call you yellow.
Tell a lie or two.
Pretend its fairy land.
You could carry me on your grey wings.

Again.
Lies are eating like maggots at my heart.
I'm young, but don't be mistaken.
Beauty is fleah.
Soon to be crevised.
I'm getting no light,
I'm soon to decompose.

Time will take its toll.
I can almost hear the clock strike tweleve.

I'm working at the pieces.
And getting no compilance.

Natural, theres a beige tint to my face tonight
As we share a silly grin.
And fall back into the black cotton hands of sleep.

Lets call it a day.

[This message has been edited by Lexy (08-26-2003 10:09 PM).]

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Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2003-08-26 11:34 PM


I feel this very much.
eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
2 posted 2003-08-27 12:27 PM


"Tell a lie or two.
Pretend its fairy land.
You could carry me on your grey wings."

loved this, good write

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-08-27 02:27 AM


Lexy - this is awesome!

Maybe you could pull a smile up from my mouth.
Maybe I could call you yellow.
Tell a lie or two.
Pretend its fairy land.
You could carry me on your grey wings.

God I loved these lines . . .
(check your spelling, k?)
xxoo

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

4 posted 2003-08-27 08:28 AM


enjoyed this one.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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