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For Yani |
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ShadowRaven Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 51 |
It is years now, though seems Only a day – since your infectious smile, Was taken away. The flame in your eyes – Once bright, now faded Left only shadows And us – now jaded. The flowers flourish – Birth of new life, Our lives empty from The moment you died. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
felt sad but warm. nice. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
Yeah I agree, it was sad but it such a loving way that it makes up for the hurt. Life is a harsh lesson, but enjoyable at times. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Amanda - I do know that fleeting smile too Is this someone who has passed or left? nice job xxoo |
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ShadowRaven Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 51 |
He is a dear friend of mine who died very suddenly just over two years ago. He has a undiagnosed heart condition. Went into a coma and ended up having to have the support machine switched off. Was a very trying time for our group. We were extremely close knit. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I am so sorry, what a beautiful tribute |
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ShadowRaven Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 51 |
Thank you. I wrote another one also, I think it's on here somewhere. Called Thinking. |
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