Dark Poetry #3 |
I only have my dreams |
Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
I only have my dreams To show me how I feel I’m living in a snow globe Calling itself disaster My smile’s a gutter I only have my dreams To show me how I am I’m walking in a death valley Crying out tragedy My smile’s a gutter I only have my dreams To show me how to love I only have my dreams It seems And my smile’s a gutter |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
I only have my dream. Mad, often dreams. are preferable to reality. Thank you for the write. Maggie |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
at times, life's sedation is in our own dreaming. Nice, enjoyed. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
"I’m living in a snow globe" I often feel like this |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ryan, awesome write you know, it reminded me of when I smile and I can FEEL myself smile I despise that . . . priceless line: I’m living in a snow globe xxoo |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
I only have my dreams as well. I could really relate to the line: My smiles a gutter. And the repition was comforting. Sometimes dreams are the only thing we need. Excellent write. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
me too my friend, me too. but my dreams play tricks on em and make me think things that make no sense, but good write adding this "There never was a genius without a tincture of madness." |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Yes dreams often don't make sense. Sometimes though, they are all we have to show us what we really desire, or what we really need. I strongly believe that dreams are the subconcious thoughts come to life. Thank you all for your responces. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yes & dreams are much better than reality!! I loved this!! The image of the snowglobe explains it all!! ELMO "No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" |
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