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Mad_Hatter
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since 2003-06-29
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Canada

0 posted 2003-08-26 04:38 AM



I only have my dreams
To show me how I feel
I’m living in a snow globe
Calling itself disaster
My smile’s a gutter
I only have my dreams
To show me how I am
I’m walking in a death valley
Crying out tragedy
My smile’s a gutter
I only have my dreams
To show me how to love
I only have my dreams
It seems
And my smile’s a gutter

© Copyright 2003 Ryan - All Rights Reserved
cusick
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since 2003-07-27
Posts 668

1 posted 2003-08-26 08:55 AM


I only have my dream. Mad, often dreams. are preferable to reality. Thank you for the write. Maggie

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

2 posted 2003-08-26 09:04 AM


at times, life's sedation is in our own dreaming. Nice, enjoyed.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2003-08-26 05:40 PM


"I’m living in a snow globe"

I often feel like this

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-08-26 08:02 PM


Ryan,
awesome write
you know, it reminded me of when I smile
and I can FEEL myself smile
I despise that . . .

priceless line:

I’m living in a snow globe
xxoo

Lexy
Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
5 posted 2003-08-26 09:47 PM


I only have my dreams as well.
I could really relate to the line:
My smiles a gutter.
And the repition was comforting.
Sometimes dreams are the only thing we need.
Excellent write.

eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
6 posted 2003-08-27 12:30 PM


me too my friend, me too. but my dreams play tricks on em and make me think things that make no sense, but good write adding this

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

Mad_Hatter
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since 2003-06-29
Posts 393
Canada
7 posted 2003-08-27 01:25 AM


Yes dreams often don't make sense.   Sometimes though, they are all we have to show us what we really desire, or what we really need.  I strongly believe that dreams are the subconcious thoughts come to life.  Thank you all for your responces.
qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
8 posted 2003-09-01 01:11 AM


Yes & dreams are much better than reality!! I loved this!! The image of the snowglobe explains it all!!

ELMO

"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!"

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