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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-04 12:10 PM

For the years

I've made a
prize
of my heart.

Hush these
winds, see
the aura of
the storm.

Somewhere along
the way, I
lost my place.

So I just
started all over again.

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

1 posted 2003-08-04 08:48 AM

You, are taking up sooooo much space in my library! but, i don't mind.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-08-04 09:42 AM

Yep me to...always starting over...hopefully something is learned everytime...

Susan C.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

3 posted 2003-08-04 07:27 PM

ahhh a clean slate, but is it ever really clean...nice write

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

4 posted 2003-08-04 08:50 PM

Theres something freshly beautiful to this. See the aura of the storm, I love that line.

22NICK22
Member

since 2003-05-29

Posts 54

5 posted 2003-08-09 11:20 AM

great...

blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

6 posted 2003-08-09 11:58 PM

Too much to say in one post, just, great.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

7 posted 2003-08-10 12:59 PM

I thought it was cool too.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

8 posted 2003-08-10 02:47 PM

It's a good thing to finally come to a resolve.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2003-08-10 03:29 PM

starting over sounds like a plan..

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

10 posted 2003-08-26 12:11 PM

Powerful statements, all, though I will admit I'm having trouble finding the connection between stanzas. Still ... love your words.

Third Libra
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

11 posted 2003-08-26 06:48 PM

You know I never get much time or chances to come into this site, but whenever I do I always try to read your stuff. Great poem.

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

12 posted 2003-08-26 08:03 PM

Meg:

good for you

Somewhere along
the way, I
lost my place.

So I just
started all over again.

and again and again and again . . .
nice write
xxoo

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

13 posted 2003-08-26 11:36 PM

I'm young but i fell like i have done this to much. great write

THANK-YOU

Tequilia

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

14 posted 2003-08-27 11:08 PM

never stop starting, then its all over........

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