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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
"Tick Toc" says My old Grandfathers clock. "Bah" sez I, I've all the time in the world.. Ticked away in the corner, the last seconds, of my "Old Folks" lives My Family. Black Forest wood, Belgium chimes, English face, The hands are of Time. Marking paces, as I age. How many turns? since 1750? How many lives, rocked gently, down to zero? My legacy, Oh keeper, of time. My curse, to not see you unwind. How many more turns, left, 'till gently I drift, out on that black sea. "Tick Toc" "Tick Toc" Till mine ears no longer hear, My Family... Click |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Nice twist click, enjoyed. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jason, this is amazing . . . I adore it xxoo |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Very mystical and enchanting. There is a watch on the desk next to me, and I could hear it ticking throughout the piece. I enjoyed this! Thanks for sharing. ~Alicia |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
i liked this, you are going to think i am sucha dork, but my favorite part was "Bah", it is kind of an inside thing wiht me and someone but it made me smile! thanks! "There never was a genius without a tincture of madness." |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
This is great!! I think my clock stopped ticking--lol!!  ELMO"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" |
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